This is a storyboard ive been working on for a few hours. Its not been edited over or changed from its original version. After you read the following, please answer, Would you play this game?
*FPS*

Storyboard for “40,000 Shores”
*Brief Description and Base of Locomotion*
Revenge and Sadness are key elements, as dark humor and cruel references seem to be the only thing keeping the *S.T.F.U.*(Submerged Tactical Force Unit) alive. Sandman, a member since his childhood is to lead a team of 6 against an underworld of hideous creatures and demons alike.
The location is “Atlantis”, a heart shaped city built by marine engineers after discovering a superheated comet on route to collide with the earth. When the comet his it will hit Yellowstone and cause the super volcano to errupt, putting the world into a nuclear winter. Scientists believe it is better to live underground than to try and find a way to destroy the commet.

Act One begins as Sandman and his crew are to investigate a breach in the lining near a research facility.They discover that “something” has escaped the facility and has broken through to the “outer waters”, letting in creatures from the outside. The story goes on as Sandman slowly finds out that scientists have been studying to make Chimera’s that can live outside the city limits.

They first fight off the initial breach of creatures. And when they push them back, they must seal the breach in the wall. They succesfully seal it, but they get flanked and separated. The only 2 members to escape are Sandman and Doomsayer. They arrive back to base. The city is flooded and the creatures have gotten inside. Years pass as the creatures breed and the city becomes infested with them. The citizens who could defend themselves have now banded together as a ragtag defense force.

Act Two begins and the S.T.F.U. has disbanded at this point as the entire city has been in chaos to try and save itself. Richard and Shannon now live on the “Plateau”, an elevated peninsula of city that had not been flooded during the “Day of Broken Hearts”. Their neighbor, Doomsayer, is the only Doctor/Medic in the area.

The story returns to Sandman, out for a jog, who is resting near one edge of Plateau, when he sees a horde of rushing creatures climbing the side.. He runs to tell the rest of the town, but arrives only to discover that there are already Creatures attacking from the other two sides. He helps defend the city, and returns home to find his wife dead on the floor, stripped naked, with claw marks on her chest. He then decides that it is his lifes effort to find the cause of the attack, and the source of the creatures.

He goes through the survivors choosing a select few to come with him to aid his search. Doomsayer being the only Medic he stays to help those in need.

~More to come~

please explain the story to me, here are the lyrics-

i once knew this man who was cursed from birth,
destined to stagger through his life just to earn his worth.
In one turn of the earth this story takes its place
upon the summer shores of nowhere, the place that he makes.
His home he returns alone from a long day,
having lost his job and soon his house and fiance.
The wrong way to turn was the path that he took.
He pissed his savings up the wall and on the grass he was hooked.
The path that he took, for granted, had messed with his sight,
see he missed the finer points such as lessons in life.
It was his wed-to-be wife that brought the cool in his heart
and by the time the Autumn came,
things were falling apart,
things were falling apart,
things were falling apart,
things were falling apart.

So nows hes standing in the Doll queue,
this girl with the face of an angel
sees hes looking down
but she has a way to sustain all.
It comes in a powdered format
and its good for healing scars
but healing scars comes at the cost
of robbing till’s and steeling cars.
Feeling far from from obliged
he follows her lead, down a beaten path
to where the homeless wallow you see,
swallows his need for pride he cant hold his thin weight
so finds himself in a church to control his intake.
Being judged by this father for trying to pave his way,
he looks him in the eyes and asks hows your faith these days?
ill strive for betterment, he replies in tones with sentiment,
but i lost all faith in this god that i once saw heaven sent.
He never meant to destroy all the things that he came across.
Its the sour taste of defeat on the street,
now all aim is lost, the pain the cost,
for his mistakes but never even really a sinner
..HUH..Its gonna be a long winter,
Its gonna be a long winter,
Its gonna be a long winter

His frail body shudders as the winter wind passes through him.
Thinking of all the people in his past that knew him.
The shaft has screwed him.
His heart is brewin for knowing what he must do
is seek shelter and aid from the love he once knew.
One last shot of courage hits him and his eyes are blood red.
Inside he sees a man living the life he once led.
Forfeits in to the anger and torture within.
He decides to pay back mankind for her sins.
Jumps in his stolen car, grabs a needle from the glove box,
decided that he never really knew what love was.
He kicks in the front door to catch them having sex,
slams him to the floor and stabs her in the neck.
She kicks and she screams so he beats her till shes slack-mouthed
not realising what he’s done he stands dumbfounded, smacked out.
Blacks out. Awakens in a holding cell knowing he cant see hope
tommorow is spring…
Time for regrowth,
Time for regrowth ,
Time for regrowth

So with the first light of spring an officer removes his chains,
his mood is pained as he enters the world his vision true again.
Takes a step and says in a defiant statement
“anything lost can be found again except for time wasted.”
He’s right on chasing on a path to heal himself,
kicks the habit befor he kills himself and feels his health
returning to mentally, physical. His intention.
Though a struggle when prevention is visible.
Redemption isnt all its cracked up to be
he decides as he drinks to smack it up a key.
On the brink of life or loss,
not knowing what he’s holding so before he fucks it up again
somebody should have told him.
No matter your status factors we’re human humble,
no matter the foundation all solid things can crumble,
no matter the strength or length up to sustain it,
it never stays the same thats simply what the seasons change.
No matter your status factors we’re human humble,
no matter the foundation all solid things can crumble,
no matter the strength or length up to sustain it,
it never stays the same thats simply what the seasons change.

well i was on this roller coaster and when it got 2 to the top top i tried to move my head i gave force next thing i knew it started to hurt like crazy it didnt snap or anything it just started to hurt i couldent move it to the back it hur like crazy i almosted screamed i went 2 da first aid they gave my tylonel and some ice it got a lil better but the left half hurts only and when i try to put my head back the left side hurts alot soo wat should i do
how do i reset it but it still hurts

It’s stopped bleeding, but it feels weird with the nail moving up and down when I walk, and rubs with the next toe towards the inside. Should I clean it first, then cut off the new excess nail and then wrap it with a band-aid? What procedures do I take? This sucks.

I am getting my first car in a couple of months and so far I have flashlights, a first aid kit, a poncho, and an electric blanket (in case I’m stuck in snow.) Is there anything else someone can recommend that I should have in addition to what I’ve listed above? And can someone please give me a link to where I can buy a Mac Computer charger that plugs into cigarette lighter? The most helpful answer gets 10 points!!!

I am in charge of teaching a class for boy scouts in order for them to earn their Readyman badges. I want to teach them first aid, but i don’t want it to sound gross, or scary. HELP?

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so there is jay i knew him for two years before me and him went out for three months but i broke up with him then a year later we went out again for about two months but now a year later when i finally get over him i was walking down the hall with my friends and he is playing my favorite song so i ask him to send it to my phone so i give him my # now out of the blue he text me but i didn’t get it cause i was asleep but i see it later and i text him back we starting text for a while but we stopped so thought that was it but one day i was sitting on my phone and it called him i hanged up but he called back and we end up talking for three hours he asked me out i said no i just wanted to be friends he acted like that was ok so we kept talking and talking till i fell asleep then the next morning he text me we text for a little while than stopped then we only said hi at school and nothing else he didn’t call me and i didn’t call him until one day he text me and school and said hey sexy so i said what cause we was in the same class and he could have said that to my face so he called me rude and i hate to be called rude so i got mad and we stop texting then i go to lunch sitting and talking to my friends and his name pop up so im dont want tosay nothing i just sit in listen one girl say he said he loved her another said he called her sexy and one said that he said do you want to have sex and other thing like that so im thinking boys will be boys so i go home and i get a text i look at it it was him we talked and hewas like my phone about to go dead so i said bye and he said yep bye i luv u and i was kinda shocked so i didnt text back so i dont know but it not the first time he aid he loved me it was just that the stuff he said to my friends was like wow and why would he say that to them knowing that i would find out

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My g/f has been diagnosed with depression. She was prescribed prozac and clozapine. She is fine for the most part but, sometimes has mental breakdowns especially when in the car. Car aniexty. She was fired from her third job in three years for being late. The last two firings was due to being nasty to customers. She lost her medical benifts due to being fired. Now she doesn’t have anymore prozac. In the last three weeks after not not having prozac she thinks everything I say is stupid. I am critical of her cause she sleeps all day and sometimes remind her that she needs to find a job. I love her and wish she would treat me nicely. Sometimes I get very pissed yell at her. I have offered to put her medical needs on my credit card but, she refuses. Now that the prozac has worn off, everything I say she rolls her eyes at…..even if it isn’t critical. She has a family history of depression. Even when she is on medical prescriptions she can snap at any moment and I am to blame. I due have a temper but, I have never had this kind of anger with any other relationship that I have ever had. Now that she isn’t working she lays on the couch and sleeps like 15 hours a day. I am a blue coller guy and work as an electrician and have bought us a town house, her a ring. I am afraid to marry her cause she will take our house that I have worked hard for and she has laid on the couch for. I am a normal guy that could get most average girls but, I feel bad to leave her cause I think she might kill herself.
we live in IL and she has applied for govenment but, it is taking weeks to get approved.